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Hey y'all

Okay, I want to make a poster sort of pic for Renee and Blaze, but so far my pic is coming out real cruddy.

What I want are some tippers and help. Should I add more shading, are the proportions off? etc etc

There is more to the pic itself, but thats hidden, so that too much won't be revealed.

Dont bother adding this to your favorites, its a junk pic. All tips and adive will be greatly appreciated. Thanks dudes

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I forgot to mention, once you adda tipper, could ya also explain, HOW as well?

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*MaiaxDale Jul 8, 2009, 3:03:37 PM
I suggest doing a poll asking this question.

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This is for the ones I see above me
Three little stars in a great big sky
Light for the world and hope for the weary
They try
~Mary Chapin Carpenter, On With The Song

So, where's the non-existant cake?
Answer: [link]
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*whitewolf16 Jul 8, 2009, 3:04:29 PM
Way more shading. With that big light behind them, I suggest shading most of the character and leaving a non-shaded "highlight" around the edge of them.
Other than that it looks really awesome. :3

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*Selenewerwolf Jul 8, 2009, 3:17:02 PM
Maybe some shading on the tan cat. Hm, I don't know what else.

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=Yupik Jul 8, 2009, 3:29:41 PM
Definitely more shading/highlighting. Other than that it looks fine.

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~CatLuvsZuko Jul 8, 2009, 4:56:16 PM
I don't have a subsciption, so I can't poll

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*MaiaxDale Jul 8, 2009, 4:58:18 PM
Gah! Me neither!

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This is for the ones I see above me
Three little stars in a great big sky
Light for the world and hope for the weary
They try
~Mary Chapin Carpenter, On With The Song

So, where's the non-existant cake?
Answer: [link]
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~Nicnak044 Jul 8, 2009, 5:38:08 PM
Hmm I like it so far :D
It will look great in the end, but I definetly suggest more shading and maybe adding some type of highlight/glow around them or even adding shadows :D Thats just my advice though and you don't have to use it XD

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~CelestialSunset Jul 8, 2009, 5:56:48 PM
wow, I like this. maybe you could change the background to something that would make Renee and Blaze stand out more. they blend in a little at the moment XD

If the picture is going to be a suspenseful thing, maybe more shadows on the cats (:

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~FrostheartIsSiamese Jul 8, 2009, 6:26:35 PM
Hmm...I don't want to follow everyone else here say say "MOAR SHADIN'", but it's all I can think of...>.<

Sorry, I wish I could give you more help. =(

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